Idea Change !!!

To make our thriller better we came up with a new idea to add to the old idea we had. We will still walk down the corridor and through the door but when the door is pushed open we are going to see me crouching down on the floor. There's also going to be a piece of paper on the floor and you can see that my wrist has been cut. Then you can see on the piece of paper that i have been writing "IT WAS AN ACCIDENT" over and over again but its written in my blood. Then i will look up to the camera, using the old idea the camera will zoom into my eye and then zoom out from the lower school students. this will look like i'm having a flashback of what happened, it will play them playing around and then the death, after this they run towards the camera and split. then it will fade out and fade back to me, the camera will then run backwards and out down the corridor with me chasing it. Finally the door will shut and will leave me up against the door and will leave the hand print in blood on the door.