3rd Time LUCKY ...

As our thriller was deleted we have had a re-think about our idea. The idea that we came up with was at the beginning we still have the shot of the door but it jumps forward bit by bit and the jumps right back to the beginning and jumps forward but with different angles.

Then we still use the old idea of going into the room when its dark and the going into my eye. Then coming out one of the lower school pupils eyes, then we are still using the piece when they play around but i think that we should change the death as it does not make sense.

Then we changed the end this also has the same effect as the beginning as it jumps forward but this time im moving forward, then the shot goes completely black and then there is a close up of my eyes.